Monday, 20 August 2007

barah ka show..

…and the sound of claps covered the hall and then faded to silence... while Rani and Jodha were brought back behind the curtain - standing like a barricade high above, like the several others.. and were rested at their respective places.. Audience moved like a snail towards the exit and almost apparently looked like they didn’t move but just stood; wanting to see some more of these acts...

While behind the curtain, Rani and Jodha were now almost steady from their last movement of being notched to their respective places. The lights from the stage were turned off. The able hands which had made Rani and Jodha play their characters, had moved off, and they lay still like the others, rested in silence..

Scared of silence and the enthusiasm to act still more made Rani blurt out to Jodha, almost weeping, hoping that the able hands may hear it and act accordingly - why did the able hands move off when I still wanted to act more, were the audience so bored of our characters that they moved off like this, why I don’t have energy like able hands to move myself when I want to, why do I’ ve to depend on the able hands..

Jodha stood like a caring mother to Rani , listening as patiently as she could and then when Rani stopped lamenting quoted “ Rani , we are puppets in the hands of the able hands and there is no way we can act without the extra energy of the able hands.. But what you are provided, which no able hand can snatch is the power to think of your own, convey your wishes of what you would like to act during the act of puppetering to the able hands and the able hands will make you move accordingly.. it is that power that u need to utilize and enjoy your acts that you wished to enact within the time period of puppetering… ” With that answer there lay the silence in the auditorium , no regrets , no laments ,only hope to see the new tomorrow ….

11 comments:

DhiOnlyOne said...

Very interesting! I really loved the concept!! :-)

chinmai said...

thanks :)

Neel said...

wow..

i suppose it is intended to convery a much deeper meaning...

very well written buddy... loved reading it

chinmai said...

thanks buddy :) remember once i had mentioned of trying my hand at writing fiction, may be this is the initiation..i guess my writing pattern has changed quite a bit..

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

very inspiring.
I know a lot of us can relate to it. Life is like that. :)

Manan Shah said...

Mater piece...

Almost like a Laureate..

Try slightly hard & you will win the nobel

chinmai said...

manan : thanks :), this is jus an amateurs effort ...
raaji : thanks :)

Kanan said...

Wow that was beautiful. So simple yet so deep. Linking your blog to mine. Hope it's alright. Thanks!

chinmai said...

kanan : thanks , thats abs. ok..:)

drhemani said...

Wow...............

Do not have words to express. Am too impressed.

Keep it up.

chinmai said...

thanks vimal bhai :)